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    Default Re: insignificant things that rile you and boil your piss

    What?

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    Pardon?

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    Dolly?

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    Default Re: insignificant things that rile you and boil your piss

    Quote Originally Posted by saga_lout View Post
    As a matter of literary style it has either too many or not enough "bugger that for a game of soldiers". One would be fine, three would be good for emphasis but two looks as though you forgot what you wrote in the previous paragraph and couldn't be bothered to proof read. HTH

    Otherwise, quite a good rant, not sweary enough for full marks though: 7/10.
    Probably the most insightful literary critique my work has ever received.

    The most I usually get is "OMG so haaawt!!! I cummed 3 times!!!"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Ax View Post
    Probably the most insightful literary critique my work has ever received.

    The most I usually get is "OMG so haaawt!!! I cummed 3 times!!!"
    It wasn't that good. My todger only threw up once.

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    Default Re: insignificant things that rile you and boil your piss

    Quote Originally Posted by saga_lout View Post
    Then some old bastard tells you smugly that he's retired and every day is like a bank holiday.
    Am I too late ?

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